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Eden Under Fire

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EDEN Under Fire

By NocturneD

Contribute by E-vay, Divine-Nataku, Garok, and Kyoko
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“It’s wonderful mother”, a single tear raced down from the white haired male’s stone cold eyes, “if you could only seen our Eden that brother and I built”. Standing on the highest ledge where the sun foreshadowed the white haired male’s perfect body looking over his accomplishment; a simple village or as he would define it as, “The promise land has been built where as no evil can touch it”.

The village was quite simple as it had houses and huts made out of the finest wood, green grass, growing trees, clean water streams running through it, a circular wall iron wall surrounding it. To protect the gracefulness of the promise land, there had to be rules, the white haired male smiled down at his accomplishment, “Anyone... affected by losing their homes to the Evotion are welcomed...”

Shortly a similar looking male stood next to him but with long dark hair, “And we trust the villagers in protecting a piece of the Godtrix and to keep the gate sealed...”

“As long as there is no evil in their hearts... there shouldn’t be any problems”, the white haired male replied.

“I trust them brother... but that doesn’t mean anyone with a lust for power will pass up a chance to look for the treasures we trusted them to protect,” the dark haired male commented, then turned around with a smile on his face, “And if that means they can do their part of the bargain, then we can let them run their own society”.

The white haired male looked out to the village him and his brother helped form, “Goodbye, village of Tougenkyou...” He chuckled to himself, “The second attempt of a garden of Eden”.

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“And from that day on Tougenkyou has been a home to many after the first, second, third, and fourth impact. More and more families affected by war travel here hoping to make a new life for themselves as we all form a new society as a neutral, not siding with Yumuza nor Sinn.” A fiery red haired female read from the pamphlet, “Such eloquence...” She sighed happily, “It’s nice that we can get out for once and actually have an education day and...” Suddenly she was interrupted with the televisions blaring in high volume as her three students were cheering and watching the televisions in the store windows they just passed.

“Oh my god Adonis is going to do it!” A strawberry blonde cheered in excitement, “Go for the pin”! She screamed with her fists raised in the air.

“Destry! Ando! Isamashii!” The red headed woman crumpled her pamphlet while calling out their names.

“ADONIS! ADONIS!” The strawberry blonde cheered again, with hearing a few more punches being made the girl loved watching this kind of sport. Made her feel pumped and want her to get in the fighting ring as well, though the nice thing would having the fans but she just loves the sport. As she would sometime try to pounce on one of her two friends that stand next to her watching the match, one of them not with great interest named Isamashii with spiked blonde hair and wore mostly black, one of the heirs to the Tenguu branch clans. The other was a rather tall fellow that goes by the name of Ando as he doesn’t put on a lot of fight looks, more of a lazy kind of person as his family are just a bunch of shadow romancers or shadow arcane members. The girl cheering and has a very positive aura like a bright sunshine is named Destry, only half kyuubi herself she is a very skillful fighter as well as the daughter of soon to be leader of the entire village Gokuto.

The red haired female raised her fox ears in annoyance, let her tail swerve side to side and walked hastily and stopped behind Destry who was in her own world, simply grabbing the collar of her orange and black track uniform as she yelped, “No Fox sensei Adonis was just about to deliver the final blow!” She shed runny tears as she tried to get back to the television display.

Fox couldn’t help but give a miserable grin, “I thought I could teach you three about history of your own home but yet you just want to screw around and watch two big muscled oiled men grab each other”.

“Sorry sensei...” Ando looked guilty, though it wasn’t his fault. Truth was, he’d follow Destry to the ends of the Earth as he started to develop some feelings for the estranged girl.

“Hnnn...” Isamashii didn’t really give a reply as he stuck his hands in his pockets to follow his sensei dragging Destry who was begging to watch the last few minutes of the match.

This really wasn’t a good day after all, just in the past few years a lot of things have been changing in Eden, or Tougenkyou with the information in the outside world. Eden managed to make it’s own special forces borrowing technology from the outside world to help increase technology and health care. Fox is really just an instructor to a few recruiters she has under her wing at the moment as her real job is being a lieutenant to the special forces team of her own. She is her own woman, though she has a child of her own growing up very quickly with her husband who she barely sees anymore because of their jobs, along with different ranks make it difficult to see each other even for only an hour a week or even a month. Her life wasn’t falling apart, just that ever since the news broke out a year ago about political Yumuza leader Alister Terrance finally getting eliminated by just a kid, not to much older than her students right now that security tightened, and Eden had to prep themselves just incase of Yumuza ever backlashed against anyone. Truth be told, there were bounties placed upon that boy’s head along with his accomplices who everyone heard went into hiding.
“Fine, since you three don’t want to learn on a fine day like this, you can just expect an assignment Monday first thing when you get...” Fox noticed that the clothing she was pulling on was lighter, she peered over her shoulder to discover she was just holding onto Destry’s jacket, with... no Destry wearing it... “OH FOR PETE SAKES!!!” She growled and looked behind herself to discover her students were gone, she could go inform their parents with some phone calls and write them progress reports on their behavior but she knew it was useless, each parent saw their child as an angel.

“Fine”, Fox chuckled a bit to herself along with some sarcasm, she wrapped up the jacket nicely and fit it nicely in between her arms, “I’ll just go back home then, Destry will just have to get her precious jacket by coming to my place” She smiled a bit, but then suddenly thought with a frown, “No... then she’ll be turning over everything in her path and look and low for it”. A sweat bead formed on the side of her head, “Guess I got to return it”. Shaking her head left and right slightly, she decided on a nice walk home would at least calm her nerves. Going through the grocery district would always cut a few minutes off of her trip home, taking a look at the fresh fruit, particularly the apples. Looking at the green ones to make sure they had no forms of bruises on them, she bought a dozen from the old man working the old fashioned register, the old man thanked her for the purchase. Fox continued her way back home while taking a big bite out of one of the apples she just bite, and slightly smirked, “like a little piece of heaven”.

Upon returning to her two story house, first thing she checked was the mail from her mailbox placed outside her front door. She reached in and pulled out a few letters addressed to her from magazine companies, fliers, as well as some huge yellow envelopes. Sliding in her keycard towards the doorlock, a small ding sound beeped to signal that the door was open as turned the knob to go inside where she was greeted by a staircase leading to upstairs to the left and to the right the living room with many exotic looking furniture you would see art fanatics collect. Kicking off her black sneakers she walked over to the couch and threw the mail onto the coffee table, then walked into the kitchen to put away the apples in her fridge but noticing upon opening it, she found out there was hardly any food in there except for some baking soda. Immediately she grunted, her husband Dingo and son Tai have a rather nasty habit of eating out the entire fridge whenever they spend time together. She opened the lower compartment and dumped the bag of apples in there, slamming the refrigerator door shut and walking back to the living room to look at the mail.

“Magazine for Tai, magazine for Dingo, publishers’ clearing house, switching phone companies, television bill, electricity bill,” Fox threw the letters aside and focused on the yellow envelope, “Oh boy something from headquarters,” this caused her to roll her eyes, “probably want me to do more overtime or Wolf requesting that I take over her schedule for the next month by the looks of this size”. She tore the envelope open pulling what appeared to be a bundle of papers, turning them over to find the text she read to herself,


To: Agent FOX/Instructor Tamamo Mae Dingo

We want to congratulate you on your fine detective work on the Baxwell diamond scandal case, helped draw it to a close along with other cases closed by your hands. But it has come to our attention that another case that is closely connected with the murder of president Alister Terrance, involving his murderer Ghendi Sai Tenguu (age 18) to have supposedly lead an Anti-Yumuza movement takeover of our own Gigasphere transport carrier containing top secret information. The results, Ghendi somehow crashed the carrier and millions of dollars worth of technology and information has been stolen that could lead a threat against Eden.

For that, we send you air tight information we gathered so far from other E.D.E.N. agents that worked undercover as agents from the S.I.N.N. organization everything surrounding the murder of Alister Terrance, to the Gigasphere takeover, and Ghendi Tenguu’s life recorded by S.I.N.N. We implore you to read every bit of it as to also give you a notice that, Yumuza has put out a bounty for Ghendi Sai Tenguu along with his accomplices for over forty five billion dollars for his capture dead or alive. And if it weren’t more disturbing his own agency put out a bounty for him as well.

It has also come to our attention that we arrested Uzaki Reginald (Age 39) as he tried entering Eden peacefully for reasons unknown. Upon interrogation, we managed to find out he was with in league with Ghendi Sai Tenguu during the times of the murder of Alister Terrance. How long we kept Uzaki Reginald in custody was for five days and remains so incase you ever want to question him for yourself. As come to our surprise, he claims to know you, as well as the wife of Gokuto Kyuubi claiming he had a relationship with her for a previous time. However he didn’t put up a fight at all and obeyed.

We would appreciate it if you would update us with whatever you find and draw any conclusions. We provide you with the permanent records of Ghendi Sai Tenguu, Uzaki Reginald, Aya-Rinoa Jiriken, and Vega (no last name given), as well as disk files, unlimited access to the investigation lab, keys to the evidence locker, and data we managed to take from SINN and Yumuza.

Your mission, is to find out what might be Ghendi Tenguu’s intentions are and to see if they pose a threat to EDEN. We’re counting on you FOX... If you have any questions, don’t hesitate to call.

Sincerely,

Captain Dead Sight Of EDEN Tactical HQ


Fox read the letter at least twice and couldn’t believe that she’s now on a bigger case that really need her detective skills, but the one thing that stuck out like a sore thumb was the name “Uzaki”. She really didn’t believe the first time she read through it could be him, or even be him at all as it was just too long ago that he just left Eden when he was in his early teens to go join SINN. Just another friend that went away hoping to find their dreams, but end up coming back probably not being able to find anything that way. She slid back into the couch, knowing that this was bigger than any of the other cases she got before plus this seemed like it would take up most of her time and has to pass her students off to Wolf’s care again for the time being.

To be continued...?
Well, this was the story I asked a few artists if I could borrow their characters for. And as you know right now I didn't really introduce many of them yet, kind of cheated Destry and her friends out of the spotlight for this chapter and focused abit on the Fox character.

So to Kyoko, Garok, and Divine, I'll get to your characters shortly. I also have to change the last names to make it seem more original since this is an original story by the way, don't worry I'll keep your characters mostly to their true nature.

And to anyone asking, what's the deal with this story? Well I want to tell you it's not a naruto story, it's a SINN AGENT story with your characters running around getting in on the spot light. So, basically if you are wondering what's what just email me.

Oh by the way E-vay... *rubs back of own head* I kind of gave Fox another name inspired by an old japanese folk tale about a fox named Tamamo-No-Mae, really an interesting read. Sorry, I can always go back and fix things guys, that's what I'm here for ^_^ atleast I got it done...

and it's apparently 6:30 am and I got to get to bed...

Fox, Destry, Isamashii and Ando are owned by Evay, the Wolf character mentioned is owned by Evay's friend... (gotta look her name up sorry)

I will update this to make it more professional looking too.

plus i know my grammar sucks...
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garok's avatar
wow man 3 months went by and you haven't write the continuation of this awesome piece of heaven madness, sombody is slacking off, hehehehe just kidding i know how hard it is don't worry i'll be all good :D